Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, the men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impeled the death of L. Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first saw the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem did be showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police was strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police did not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G had to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L. The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of killing him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice. The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L had no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needed to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie. For the question which is who killed Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author gave us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? They were all influnced by the society, weren't they? Thus all of all, it should be the society, shouldn't it?
Eva Edited by Grammar Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brus Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, the men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impelled the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first saw the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and wanted to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needed to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L liked what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chosed to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author give us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?
Edited by Angelina Zhang (Grammar)
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impel the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death.When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge he to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley is anxious for killing L, and other men are hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." p61
After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling; this made George hopeless and wants to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only need to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author gave us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?
Kiki's first Draft ( EVENTUALLY FINISHED! ):
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brusLennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, the men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impel the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needs to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author gave us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?
Outline:
Introduction:
Background Information: Lennie made another mistake! He kills Curley's wife! So, he follows G's request and goes to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, men from the ranch are all coming to catch him.
Hook:Who kills Lennie?
Thesis Statement:
Poor police
The pressure from other "Ranch Hands" especially Curley
The falling of the dream
Body Paragraph 1:
Topic Sentence: Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death.
Point: The weak and incompetent of the police
Evidence: When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G kills Lennie, Slim encourages G that " Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." (When the "Ranch Hands" find Curley's wife is killed by L, they go to hunt L. And after Slim finds G kills L, he invites G to go to drink with him.)
Explantion: From the quote of Curley, we know that he decides to let L pay his mistake by killing L by himselfConnection:Conclusion/Transition Sentence: Why they don't go to tell the police? They decided to kill L by themselves but not go to tell the police. This really showes the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen. Because L does not kill C's wife on purpose, he won't have to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushments which lead L into death. But this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
Body Paragraph 2:
Topic Sentence: The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a pushing to L's death.
Point: Pressure
Evidence: Curley is anxious for killing L, and other men are hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." Candy said:"I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog. " Explantion: When Candy's dog was killed, Candy felt regretful for not killing it by himself. G does not want to regret as Candy later, so he chooses to kill L by himself. By this quote of Curley, we could know that Curley hates Lennie very very deeply. If he found L, he must kills him, obviously. The other men are hunting, C is eagar to do this too. If G could not find L first, others will punish L until he dies. G would not let this happen. When Candy's dog was killed, Candy felt regretful for not killing it by himself.Connection: G does not want to regret as Candy later, so he chooses to kill L by himself. They could not run away because this will not work, they will be found. There is no choice for G to choose, the only thing he could do is to take the gun and end L's suffering. If he does not, others will take L into HELL, and suffer him until he dies.
Transition Sentence: This is another pushing particles that force George to kill L, and there is one inside
Body Paragraph 3:
Topic Sentence: Their dream is falling, this makes L hopeless and does not care it anymore.
Point: The falling of their dream makes L become kind of numb for the dream, and only think about how to get saved from the present situation.
Evidence: Candy tells L their dream could not become true. L turns around numbly.
Explantion: Candy tells L their dream is broken, the money is not enough, and the dream will never become true. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future.
Connection: When L realizes their dream is really a dream which could not be true, he becomes kink of numb and blank. From this moment, he start to think about the present situation more than the dream they had before. He knows that leave L like what is like in the present is not a good way to L. It's like a suffering to L. Live is much more difficult than death.
Transition Sentence: Because of these thoughts, L eventually decides to kill L and end the painful life of L.
Conclusion:
Thesis: :
The incompetent police has response to L's death.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands impels the death of L.
And the falling of their dream eventually decides the death penalty of L.
Connection: (Why my essay is important)
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Kiki's first Draft (NOT FINISHED):
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brusLennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impel the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
You can connect more things about the society, not only for the police.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just 拘禁 Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's 悲剧的 life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
Connect with the first paragraph. Those ranch hand influence by the society, so they were not very nice to Lennie.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy said to George:" XXXXXXXXXXXXXX" Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became 遥遥无期 anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to 解救 Lennie from this difficult life. With no 奢望 of the bubble future, George only need to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to 解救 lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
Their dream is broken by the fact,and Lennie’s dead is a symbol to show their dream can not come ture.
veThe last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needs to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
Dream can connect with police,ranch hand and dream is the special symbol,because this dream makes George and Lennie have hope but it’s also makes them forgot the fact.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author ga us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it? I think those three reasons can connect toghther and give the reader a main reason. It’s more easy to understand why Lennie be killed in the end.
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Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, the men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impeled the death of L.Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first saw the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem did be showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police was strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police did not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G had to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of killing him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L had no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needed to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who killed Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author gave us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? They were all influnced by the society, weren't they? Thus all of all, it should be the society, shouldn't it?
Eva Edited by Grammar
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brus Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, the men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impelled the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first saw the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and wanted to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needed to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L liked what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chosed to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author give us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?
Edited by Angelina Zhang (Grammar)
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impel the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge he to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley is anxious for killing L, and other men are hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." p61
After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling; this made George hopeless and wants to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only need to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author gave us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?Kiki's first Draft ( EVENTUALLY FINISHED! ):
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brusLennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, the men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impel the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just arrest Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's tragic life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needs to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author gave us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?
Outline:
Introduction:
Background Information: Lennie made another mistake! He kills Curley's wife! So, he follows G's request and goes to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, men from the ranch are all coming to catch him.
Hook: Who kills Lennie?
Thesis Statement:
Body Paragraph 1:
Topic Sentence: Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death.
Point: The weak and incompetent of the police
Evidence: When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G kills Lennie, Slim encourages G that " Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." (When the "Ranch Hands" find Curley's wife is killed by L, they go to hunt L. And after Slim finds G kills L, he invites G to go to drink with him.)
Explantion: From the quote of Curley, we know that he decides to let L pay his mistake by killing L by himself Connection: Conclusion/Transition Sentence: Why they don't go to tell the police? They decided to kill L by themselves but not go to tell the police. This really showes the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen. Because L does not kill C's wife on purpose, he won't have to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushments which lead L into death. But this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
Body Paragraph 2:
Topic Sentence: The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a pushing to L's death.
Point: Pressure
Evidence: Curley is anxious for killing L, and other men are hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." Candy said:"I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog. " Explantion: When Candy's dog was killed, Candy felt regretful for not killing it by himself. G does not want to regret as Candy later, so he chooses to kill L by himself. By this quote of Curley, we could know that Curley hates Lennie very very deeply. If he found L, he must kills him, obviously. The other men are hunting, C is eagar to do this too. If G could not find L first, others will punish L until he dies. G would not let this happen. When Candy's dog was killed, Candy felt regretful for not killing it by himself. Connection: G does not want to regret as Candy later, so he chooses to kill L by himself. They could not run away because this will not work, they will be found. There is no choice for G to choose, the only thing he could do is to take the gun and end L's suffering. If he does not, others will take L into HELL, and suffer him until he dies.
Transition Sentence: This is another pushing particles that force George to kill L, and there is one inside
Body Paragraph 3:
Topic Sentence: Their dream is falling, this makes L hopeless and does not care it anymore.
Point: The falling of their dream makes L become kind of numb for the dream, and only think about how to get saved from the present situation.
Evidence: Candy tells L their dream could not become true. L turns around numbly.
Explantion: Candy tells L their dream is broken, the money is not enough, and the dream will never become true. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future.
Connection: When L realizes their dream is really a dream which could not be true, he becomes kink of numb and blank. From this moment, he start to think about the present situation more than the dream they had before. He knows that leave L like what is like in the present is not a good way to L. It's like a suffering to L. Live is much more difficult than death.
Transition Sentence: Because of these thoughts, L eventually decides to kill L and end the painful life of L.
Conclusion:
Thesis: :- The incompetent police has response to L's death.
- The pressure from other Ranch Hands impels the death of L.
- And the falling of their dream eventually decides the death penalty of L.
Connection: (Why my essay is important)rita edit meaning
Kiki's first Draft (NOT FINISHED):
Lennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brusLennie made another mistake! He killed Curley's wife! So, he followed G's request and went to the brush to wait for G's coming. At the same time, men from the ranch were all coming to catch him. But the question is… Who killed Lennie? Was that really George? There are three sides which are poor police, the pressure from other Ranch Hands and the falling of their dream. They all impel the death of L.
Because of the weakness and incompetent of the police, no one would have to pay for L's death. When they first see the died body of Curley's wife, Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." After G killed Lennie, Slim encouraged G that “Come on, George. Me an' you'll go in an' get a drink." When the "Ranch Hands" found Curley's wife was killed by L, they went to hunt L. And after Slim discovered Lennie was died already, he invited G to go to drink with him. Now the problem is showed. Instead of going to tell the police, they decided to kill L by themselves. This really unfolds the incompetent of the police. If the police is strong enough, this won't happen, because L did not kill C's wife on purpose. If this happens at present, the judge may not adjudge him to die. But because of the police does not have the prestige to make people trust it and to solve conflicts, L will be killed by the Ranch Hands, and G has to kill L to protect him from the suffering of the other Hands. Thus, police should be a part of pushes which lead L into death. Also this is not the only reason, there are some more pressures impels the death of L.
You can connect more things about the society, not only for the police.
The pressure from other Ranch Hands is also a push to L's death. Curley was anxious for killing L, and other men were hunting him too. Curley said:" I'll kill the big son-of-bitch myself. I'll shoot 'im in the guts." This could really show the Curley's desire of killing Lennie. If he finds L, L will not run away from suffering of death. And before these things, after Candy's dog was killed by Calson, Candy felt regretful and said to George: "I ought to of shot that dog myself, George. I shouldn't ought to of let no stranger shoot my dog." Candy got painful on his heart because of regretion. George did not want to regret as Candy later, so he chose to kill L by himself. If there was no pressure from the other men, he may not decide like this. If the other men chose to just 拘禁 Lennie instead of kill him, George would let them do that but not end Lennie's 悲剧的 life. Because of the pressure from other men, this became the choice from no choice.
Connect with the first paragraph. Those ranch hand influence by the society, so they were not very nice to Lennie.
The last point is the decline of their dream. Candy said to George:" XXXXXXXXXXXXXX" Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became 遥遥无期 anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to 解救 Lennie from this difficult life. With no 奢望 of the bubble future, George only need to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to 解救 lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.
Their dream is broken by the fact,and Lennie’s dead is a symbol to show their dream can not come ture.
veThe last point is the decline of their dream. Candy told George their dream could not become true, and G turned around numbly. At this time, George could not deny that their dream became distant anymore. Their dream was falling, this made George hopeless and want to think about the present situation only. With the heavy blow of L killing Curley's wife, L has no more thoughts about their dream-like future. The most important thing now was to rescue Lennie from this difficult life. With no extravagant hope of the bubble future, George only needs to think about what could be the best way for Lennie instead of the dream. He knew that leaving L like what was like in the present was not a good way to L. It was like a suffering to L. Live was much more difficult than death. For what good for L, George ignored their dream and chose to rescue Lennie from the pressure of this difficult life which had no dream and hope. Thus the falling of their dream is the third pushing reason of Lennie.Dream can connect with police,ranch hand and dream is the special symbol,because this dream makes George and Lennie have hope but it’s also makes them forgot the fact.
For the question which is who kills Lennie, these 3 points are arranged here. Knowing these are important. Since now, we are not only reading a story or a fiction. We could know more about the background and the society at that time. The author ga us lots to think about. This made reading became more meaningful. So at the end... Who kills Lennie? The incompetent police had response to L's death? The pressure from other Ranch Hands impaled the death of L? Or the falling of their dream eventually decided the death penalty of L? All of all, it should be society, isn’t it?
I think those three reasons can connect toghther and give the reader a main reason. It’s more easy to understand why Lennie be killed in the end.